Instead of a line of poetry to start your lines, you're using a word, BUT you are still working on wrapping and really painting a picture or telling a story. 
We are not backtracking, but we are ending the year with the ability to write poems.
I am so very proud of the growth and effort I have seen this year in writing. The ability to put thoughts down on paper in an innovative and comprehensible way is truly a skill for life.Wow!
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I think tristins in cool because it is a song and she put emotions and that explains me sometimes in and out of school. so yes i like hers and it is amazing so keep it up.
Beebegirl<3
Annalise had imagrey i pictured plants, but at the same time kids.
~!brittany S
i like camillies.i like how short it is but very good.
~lynzee h
I loved how Anneleise talked about knowledge growing into something more.
I liked how Tristen put a lot of emotion in her poems and how it really painted a picture.
I also liked Josh's poem about the race.
~Courtney J
I like Luke's poem because it made me think about what live would br like without animaks. It made me think about looking out the winow and looking at the birds, wood chucks, and the rabbits in the yard. His poem has aazing imagry.
~ mackenzie corcran~
I like the way Courtney centered her poem. It showed me a different style to do my poem in. I also really liked her title!
~Anneleise Hess:D
I agree to Briana`s poem for mondays well they are tiering and the begining of the week.
Beebegirl<3
i think alan's poem is creative, also i think that veronicas is nicely written and serves a point in life
I really liked Helena's poem "Perfect Sound." I liked how her picture was faded, making it look like an echo to her words. Nice job! :) and it's cool that she wrote about music and the piano because she's actually a VERY talenented player.
~Courtney Jansen
kelley show a lot of aferte to do as best.
-Joshua C:)
kelly`s is short and simple but i like hers because she put less and some thought into it.
Beebegirl<3
I really loved Alan's play station poem i think it personally describes him and his love for his play station.Keep up the good work Alan
-Brooklyn D
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