What a week it's been for poems!
There were so many that I put numerous ones together so I wasn't taking so many shots of them. And, there were so many really good ones, that used a line of poetry and developed an idea typical of what you'd usually do, that I put many of them down near the main office so visitors can see what you're capable of.
The next format is still an acrostic, but PLEASE, do not revert to elementary school: have wrapping of lines, inside punctuation, a story or theme to develop. 
As the directions state: use the letters to make you think about the words you use.
It's been a week full of some good in-class work and some great out-of -class work on your poetry. Can't wait to get next week's essays! Here's hoping many of you actually do them!
14 comments:
Wow! I love Katie's poem. she did an awesome job with her imagry. i could really see her dog chewing their toy.
~Mackenzie Corcoran~
I love how well Brittany described the waterfall. I also love that she used the word glistening, instead of a usual word.
~Tristen B.
To me Luke's poem really stands out because it reminds me of my room, as i think it will remind others of theirs.
~ Veronica C
I like how look turned the poem into how cluttered his room was.
Trever E.
I like how Katie made her poem show that you can see almost her whole poem in your head. She did a really good job!
~Amber M.
Haha...I liked Sam's poem. I can see him holding a little bunny. Cute! His poem really gave a relaxed and loving emotion.
~Courtney J.
I like how Briana drew a picture with her poem. that was pretty cool
Matt L
i htink that all of the people wrote really nice poems and veronicas was extremly well writen
i love darrens poem, he sounds very much like a poet. i got some imagry from his poem.
~!Brittany S.~
I really liked Sarahs poem and how she wrote it. I like how you cant even tell that there was a format to follow
Dillon L.
I Like how in anneleise's poem she realated it to a true life experiance.
-Alan E
this, in my opinion, was the easier of the poems that we did. I liked darrens poem because it was nice and neatly writen
-Ryan Black
I think that Chad needs to tipe his eassy but other then that he had good ideas and almost nows what he had to do.
-josh C:)
i think the poam pj made is very interestin-luke
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