Wow.The answer to the question was in the multiple choice questions, and I'm betting most of you got that one right. It said that the theme was of a boy showing he was mature enough to handle himself in tough situations. Right?
That means Clyde didn't need to cancel the trip. Once you had your answer, then you'd ask yourself what detail from the story proves that. You'd then go about using that detail and explanations with that detail to show.
Tough to do, but some of you were able to do that. And, I gave credit to the other side, too, IF you were able to fully develop the answer, like Curtis did. But, in high school that probably won't. or shouldn't, fly.
Use the detail, and anything else given to you, to write the best answer. 
Think. 
Ms. Bassette's Believe It or Not rings true here: The world doesn't want to know what you're thinking until the world knows you can think.
School, parents, teachers, we're all about helping you to learn to think clearly. 
Many of you are doing a great job of becoming those good thinkers we want.It's time for a break. Enjoy; you deserve it.
10 comments:
good detail and knoe what he is tolking about.
-Joshua C:)
I like in Curtis' he compares Clydes' situation it to real life, in that case wolves.
I relly like Darren's answer. He said so much and had a lot of detail on one page. I also agreed with him about not canceling the trip. Clyde was mature enough to hanle a tough situation.
~Courtney J :)
I like how Courtney Really painted the picture of how Clyde was mature enough to handle a situation on his own.
Trever E.
I really liked that story. I think it's a story that teaches a lesson and that lesson is to keep a clear head in dangerous situations. Clyde made the right decisions and did what he knew was right.
- Alexis Scarlata
these are all really good answers and i agree with most of them
You can definitely tell all of us have grown in writing. These are all really good. Good job!
-Chloee M.(:
You can tell that everyone of us knows what we are doing! They are all set up with detail, name of the story, and author!
~ Amber(:
I think that Shannon did a good job keeping her paragraph short but adding good detail. She said what she wanted and not draging it out.
~Sarah S.
I like how Sarah opened her paragraph. It described the setting perfectly. She also had just the right amaount if detail.
~Tristen B.
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